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Musen 11

Writer :: khaliisucks

Reviewer :: kimvante_

Book :: Musen 11

Cover :: 9/10

I really liked the cover. The purple and red hues were perfectly blended with each other to portray a horrific theme to the story. The picture of Jin holding a gun and the bruises on his face fits well with the entire vibe of the book which is horror, gruesome, and mystery; survival in general. The fonts displayed matched very well with the colors too.

Title :: 5/5

The title is pertinent to the story. I like how you didn't apply any cliché titles example 'The Zombie Apocalypse' and instead used the FM as the overall base of the headline as well as the plot

Synopsis :: 10/10

Okay, so I genuinely loved the synopsis, it's packed with the right facts and information. You didn't provide too much data nor did you add too little. You displayed the initial baseline of the story in the synopsis which is the best thing because it actually captivated me and urged me to click the read button to know more. Mystery and thriller are the topmost genres of your book and you illustrated exactly that.

Plot :: 26/30

I'll be honest with you, I've read many zombie fics and almost all of them equated with each other in one way or another. The case is similar to your story, not exactly the same but a few figures here and there example: survival. I'd probably have given you a 20 for the plot but what made me avoid doing that is because your storyline is so engrossing, you had me hooked from the description itself. The way you portrayed the story attracted me the most. The built up of the plot was simple but feasible.

Characters :: 8/10

The characters could've been a bit more developed. I liked the fact how you didn't have only BTS members in it and rather included many other leads as well. But I think that the personalities of the members can be a tad bit more different than what they are in reality. And I also think that you maybe could've kept them separated in the story rather than in one unit. It's not a grim aspect but uniqueness would be appreciated.

Grammar :: 23/25

A story is only appealing to read when the writing style and grammar are perfect or at least readable, yours were both. I relished in the fact that you tried using rich and complex words and not just plain English lines and dialogues. I absolutely loved your descriptive writing though. Each and every detail described were satisfying; it helped me imagine the scenarios with more precision. There was the absence of colons and semicolons detected in a few areas.

Writing style :: 9/10

I liked your writing style. The paragraphs weren't too long but a few here and there were prolonged. According to me, the ideal size of a paragraph consists of 4-5 lines. The transition from one scene to another was sleek too.

Overall ::
Overall, your story was highly inspiring. A few factors need to be improved but everything else was fascinating. The main thing that I loved about your story was the title, plot, synopsis, and grammar. I would suggest this story to those who are interested in the genre horror and thriller with a sprinkle of mystery. I hope my judging was fair enough. :)

Total :: 90/100

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