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Terminal

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by KPOP_House

by KPOP_House

Author alienataed

Reviewer: luvrtaekook

TERMINAL

Cover: 8/10

The cover is simple and nice. It is clean and eye-catching. It can be improved but overall, it’s lovely. I like it because it’s not messy and it can attract readers.

Title: 4/5

The title is unique and pertinent to the story.

Synopsis: 7/10

The synopsis is not confusing, but I think you can improve it.
+you can add a quote if you want to, it’s just an opinion. Adding quotes can attract readers too.

Plot: 26/30

The plot is unique, the first chapters were a little bit confusing because I didn’t know the background story of the characters. Maybe you should try explaining the background story first but overall, it’s actually nice.

Characters: 9/10

Their personalities were well portrayed, and I think they’re realistic. Good job on that.

Grammar: 22/25

Your grammar is good, although I can see some mistakes sometimes. It’s not making me lose focus and it’s not affecting your story that much.

Writing style: 8/10

I like your writing style a lot and I like how you end a chapter. Your choice of words is nice too, they’re not mundane.

Overall

I would love to continue reading this story. I like it a lot, you just need a little bit improvement but overall, your story is really lovely. Keep writing and I can see potential in you.

Review Scores : 84/100

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