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Demon Princess

Author : V4Vincet

Reviewer : luvrtaekook

DEMON PRINCESS

Cover: 6/10

The cover is too simple, it lacks the dark vibes of the story, it’s not that eye-catching and it needs a little bit of improvement. Although your cover is clean but it lacks those points that are very important. It needs a touch of improvement.

Title: 3/5

The title is commonly used and it’s a bit bland. It is pertinent to the story but I think you need to find a strong title that isn’t commonly used in Wattpad or any writing platforms.

Synopsis: 7/10

The synopsis is fine although I think a dark synopsis will suit your story description, that way it will intrigue readers to read your story and it would match your title.

Plot: 27/30

The plot is unique. The first chapters were interesting and I love how you place some cliffhanger at the end (Chapter 7: Heart-warming). Although some chapters are a bit rushed and I think you can improve on that.

Characters: 6/10

I don’t really understand their personalities, maybe you can highlight that more. Their individual stories need improvement too, that way we can understand them better.

Grammar: 23/25

Your grammar is very well, the punctuations are well placed and the tenses are clear too. I noticed that you used the word “anyways”, although it is correct in the dictionary but it’s not a word, you can simply use “anyway” instead of “anyways”.

Writing style: 9/10

I like your writing style, the choice of words are great too but sometimes I find your dialogues a bit messy. Just an opinion, you don’t have to use capital letters in expressing a loud emotion. But overall, your writing style is well.

Overall

Your story is unique and interesting and I believe that it has potential. Just remember the points that I gave you, that will help you a lot in terms of improving. I would love to read more and keep writing!

Review Scores: 81/100

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