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ALPHA

Author: yoonchim_Z

Reviewer: wuwtaetae

ALPHA

Cover: 6/10

I thought the title was really aesthetic but it was crowded, really. try to make it a tad simpler, also, I couldn't see jimin properly when I first took a look at it. I had to observe the cover for a couple of minutes to take in all the elements of the cover and readers usually don't do that, they just take a look for a second and decide if they wanna read it.

Title: 2/5

I thought the title was really basic, very much so. I wish you'd change it to be more aesthetic and appealing. also, I'd like it if you added the fact that your book is jikook based on the title, it's important.

Synopsis: 8/10

I thought your synopsis was very interesting. it made me want to read the book, it lured me in but I found some grammatical errors there and readers, they judge your writing based on your synopsis so I suggest you get rid of those errors.

Plot: 20/30

well, I like the plot but I think I've read books with the protagonist changing their gender/rank just like jeongguk did in here so I can't really give you more points since it's all about the originality.

Characters: 7/10

I just felt like some of the things the characters didn't make any sense. you know, it was like jeongguk just changed totally. he was being this big bad wolf at his previous school and totally transformed into a crackhead when he arrived at the school for alphas. sometimes it just didn't make sense.

Grammar: 20/25

there were some grammatical errors, mostly with commas but nothing major, I'm sure you'd improve a lot with time since I see a lot of potential in you.

Style: 6/10

I love the way you write but I hated the fact that you keep changing povs. it got me confused, really. you don't have to show everybody's emotions in detail. also, I think that you can bring in their emotions with the 3rd person or author's pov pretty well, actually.

I enjoyed your story but mostly I was confused for the most part because of some scenes that conflicted with each other and the change in povs. make sure to maintain a stable point of view and you'll be good.

Review Scores: 69/100

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