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Morning

Author taetakeurman

Reviewer : guliamalia

MORNING

Cover - 7/10

Well it is cute but you can't really see Yoongi. It is also really dark if you use this picture maybe add a splash of blitz remember we judge books as we see them more than the inside.

Title 3/10

The title has nothing to do with the book so far. The word morning needs to be mentioned more, it makes the story way better when it is.

Synopsis 5 /10

Updates maybe needed for the story to truly make sense and add one shot to the tags if it isn't their already. There wasn't much to catch interest.

Plot 15/30

Your plot isn't as sturdy as it could be i don't feel any emotions after reading it and that shouldn't be. Take each chapter and define it properly so that readers want to come back.

Character 3/10

You gave a small description of a character which does not help at all. There isn't really any growth within the characters but then again you have five characters.

Grammar 9/25

There are grammatical errors sprinkled throughout, the punctuation is alright so is the spelling but subject verb agreement needs to be used.

Writing style 1/10

Maybe use a planning system for the chapters.

Overall

Fix the cover, make it brighter so that we can see Yoongi,use the word morning. The plot needs working on that will make continuing easier. Make descriptions for the characters and give them characteristics, also give the story some sort of fun factor.

Review Scores : 43/100

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