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K-Drama Partner

Author: Sugas_littlesis

Reviewer: sprite_and_hamburger

K-Drama Partner

Cover - 6/10

The cover is beautiful. The font style and color are going well with the background but one thing which I like to point out is, this cover isn't portraying your plot. Yoongi is reading on the cover, it was supposed to be watching a drama or anything which can show it.

Title - 2/5

I didn't found any relevance to the plot. I read more than 15 chapters in the book still it doesn't seem like your story is focused on the term 'k-drama partner'. The story seems like some love story or fluff. The title didn't give justice to the plot.

Synopsis - 5/10

One thing I wanna say is please read your blurb, you don't realize but you added "highest-ranking" just after the dialogue which seems like it's part of the dialogue. The dialogues in the blurb are pretty much interesting but your 'highest-ranking' ruin it for me. You can show your rank below the blurb, just put some horizontal line and write your ranking there. There's formate for writing rank as well, writers usually write it below the blurb so I suggest you the same.

Plot - 10/30

One thing I wanted to say is there isn't any actual plotline in your book. The way you are describing things is like you are dictating rather than writing a story. The plot pace is way too fast and scenes aren't cohesive enough. You are jumping on scenes quite a lot. Your book is more like a good example of 'white room syndrome', there's nothing there to imagine the scenes except the characters present in the scenes. I didn't find anything which can describe the term 'K-Drama Partner'. Try to add more details in the scenes and please don't jump on the scenes. If you are writing something like 'k-drama' then please add something which can relate to it. The story seems like you are adding too much in one plot or more like adding cliché into cliché, lame BTS jokes and theory

Character - 7/10

Yoongi's character is very much noticeable in the story. It is clearly showing that he is in love with chaerin but he is controlling him. Chae also seems in love with him but she isn't disclosing as well. I would like if you add more scene together with both leads and show the love and affection between them so readers can see their love.

Grammar - 20/25

You have good grammar in the book but you still don't know some basic info about grammar. I found some tiny tiny spelling and grammar mistakes and a lot of punctuation mistakes. I suggest reading about dialogue tags and action tags (if you want you can read my review on 'my salvation in your heart' in this book). Other than that you have good grammar throughout the book.

Writing Style - 6/10

The way you are narrating the story isn't impressive, as I said before it seems like you are dictating. I suggest, use punctuation marks to connect two or more clauses so your sentences can become long because you have a lot of short sentences which doesn't look good in my opinion. Lack of details is affecting your writing style because there isn't much to read so it doesn't seem pleasing. The vocabulary in the book isn't that great because you can clearly find words that can be replaced with more suitable ones.

Overall:

Trust me I expected more from this book because I really love this title so I was expecting something more from this book. If you pay some attention and some details in this then your story can become great. Take your pace slow and give details in the scenes, you can add some personality traits as well.

Review Scores : 56/100

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