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Third Eye

Writer :: khaliisucks

Reviewer :: chemicalkrackel

Title :: Third Eye

Cover :: 1/10

The cover has a tinge of mystery but it has nothing that I can call out of the world, I need you to fix the fonts and add up informant grabbing things like sub wordings and your username or pen name, and as you say it's a fanfiction sometimes fanfictions sell up because of the face claim so make sure you add a face claim that will grab attention.

Title :: 4/5

It's nothing rare but it's suiting the plot suggestive and adds up to the mystery until one pin up the button read because I was ready to kill my WiFi just to read the book.

Synopsis :: 10/10

Intriguing, it was, it added to my interests, it was like the pull up trigger of adrenaline that rushed into my mind.

Plot :: 30/30

It deserves reads and I'll be one stupid to not mark it up, it's like a bang that would pull up the rushing interests in your mind all over, it's really really good.

Character :: 10/10

Can I just marry the min yoongi you wrote about because damn all the characters portrayed are manifested over a latibule where all you see is good work and patience?

Grammar :: 20/20

So and so no grammatical error and I am glad because dang I am on my periods, food deprived, sleep deprived, and fucking cussing periods out to destroy my exercising routine so yeah I am kinda fucked and decent grammar in your book made me feel better so thank you very much you don't suck Khali.

Writing style :: 9/10

I love it but a quick suggestion: don't create characters profile like that in your first chapter by adding images, it ruins the work quality, you can choose a better way for a character portfolio

Overall ::
I like your book and keep going and you're very cool and we can be great buddies and also change your characters portfolio into a better customized method.

Total:: 84/100

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