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Through Games and Sorrow

Author : TzoBngtn

Reviewer : guliamalia

Through Games and Sorrow

Cover 2/10

Do you think this represent your story in any way? If you like it good for you but it is very basic.
The background is boring, so  is the font for the words.

Title 7/10

The title goes along with the plot, the name  could've been one word less or phrased differently.

Sypnosis 4/10
Fix these things we usually see the cover of books and immediately decide if we like or hate it  so don't have such boring cover.

Plot 15/30

The description gives a bare explanation of what to expect and makes me not want to read it is boring, the title goes with the plot so good on that. The plot is cliché very cliché spice it up a bit.

Characters 3/10

The main characters are obviously taekook I get that but mention other characters a bit more as i said its cliché, cliché is fun at times this isn't one.

Grammar 25/25

You have correct spelling and punctuation very good. I have nothing more to say cause I didn't found any grammar mistakes.

Writing style 5/10

You have amazing grammar through out but the story is boring. Your title may have matched your story but the cover was basic and unoriginal

Overall

The cover is way to basic, the title is alright, your plot is so unoriginal, not enough mention of other characters overall this story was boring, basic and cliché

Review Scores : 61/100

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