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Suddenly Superheroes?

Writer :: lalalalala7fire

Reviewer :: kimvante_

Title :: Suddenly Superheroes?

Cover :: 8/10

I really liked the cover. The purple background gave off the perfect heroic glam. The font smoothly blended with the hues. However, I think the pic you chose of Taehyung doesn't match with his superhero look. It's rather portraying a sad effect to the story. It isn't necessary to provide a face claim to the cover of a book. I suggest you remove the face claim or maybe use Taehyung's silhouette because even in the story, his superhero side is hideous and not revealing.

Title :: 5/5

The title is pertinent to the story. I suggest you remove the question mark at the end because the title sounds more of a statement than a question so adding a question mark at the end, according to me, does not make sense.

Synopsis :: 10/10

Okay, so, I love love loved the synopsis. It's packed with the right facts and dialogues. You didn't provide too much information nor did you add too little. You displayed the initial baseline of the story in the synopsis which is the best thing because it actually left me intrigued and urged me to click onto the read button to know more. Supernatural and mystery are the topmost genres of this book and you illustrated that well.

Plot :: 28/30

I'll be honest with you, I've read many supernatural and mystery fics and almost all of them matched with each other in one way or another. It's the same case with your story, it's not exactly the same but a few parts here and there, for example: saving the city. I would have given you a 20 for the plot but what stopped me from doing so is because your storyline is too absorbing. You had me hooked from the very first chapter. The way you instructed the story attracted me the most. The built up was simple but feasible.

Characters :: 8/10

The characters could've been a bit more developed. I liked how you portrayed the female protagonist as strong and hard headed but a sensitive and soft woman from the inside. I also liked the fact how you have the BTS members separate and not together as one unit. But I think that the personalities of the members could be slightly different than what they are in reality. It's not a grim aspect but uniqueness would be appreciated.

Grammar :: 24/25

A story is only appealing to read when the writing style and grammar are perfect or at least readable, yours were both. I would've relished in the fact if there was a usage of more rich and complex words than simple English. I absolutely loved your descriptive writing though. Each and every details described were satisfying; it helped me imagine the scenarios with more clarity. There was also the absence of colons and semi-colons detected in a few areas.

Writing style :: 9/10

I liked your writing style. The paragraphs weren't too long but some were a bit too short. According to me, the ideal size of a paragraph consists of 4-5 lines. Though the descriptive paragraphs were precise. The transition from one scene to another was sleek too.

Overall ::
Overall, your story was highly impressive. Just a few factors need to be improved but everything else was admirable. I'm still reading the story and will continue doing so. The main thing that I loved about your story was the plot, synopsis, and grammar. I would suggest this story to those who are interested in supernatural and mystery with a sprinkle of romance. I hope my judging was fair enough. :)

Total :: 92/100

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