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Jeu du Sang

Author : polysemy

Reviewer : kimvante_

JEU DU SANG

Cover - 8/10

The cover looks really aesthetic and pretty. I specially loved the fonts used. But I suggest you choose a somewhat dark picture for the cover, example a picture of a shadow or something thriller kind which matches the overall vibe of the book.

Title - 2/5

I really don't know what the title means. I don't even know which language the title is in nor did you write in the synopsis what it means. I don't stan Ateez so I don't know if it's related to them but I suggest you add the meaning of the title in the synopsis. Not everyone will Google out the meaning. Title plays a very important role when you stumble across a book.

Synopsis - 7/10

The synopsis is too less in my opinion. Ofcourse you don't wanna give away too much information but try to add one paragraph of what the story is like, example where it takes places or anything in particular that will grab the attention of the readers almost immediately. 

Plot - 25/30

In my opinion, the plot seems sort of unique. I'm actually a fan of dark themes specially mystery and fantasy with a sprinkle of thriller. Your story surely revolves around devilish stuff which is common but your way of wrtitng makes it special. I suggest you don't decribe gore scenes in a more complex manner. It's definitely your wish how you want your book to be but gore stuff is not supported by many readers on wattpad which might be a loss for you.

Character - 8/10
I loved how the characters had dark personalities, completely opposite to how they are in real life. The only thing which I found odd was that they seem unrealistic. Sure, they are just characters but a reader can connect with a character only if the character appears to be realistic.

Grammar - 23/25

A story is only appealing to read when the writing style and grammar are perfect or atleast readable. You had both which made the story look interesting to read without any interruptions and with a smooth flow. There were a few spelling mistakes detected which is normal.

Writing style - 10/10

The writing style was as same as how other books have so it was not a problem. The paragraphs weren't too short or too long either, just the the perfect amount of lines. The main good thing about your writing were the descriptions and details provided about each and everything.

Overall:

Overall, the story is impressive. Though I think you can score full on 100 if you consider the following points I mentioned above. The main thing that I loved about your story was the descriptive writing, your writing style and grammar which were on point. I hope my judging was fair enough. :)

Review Scores= 83/100

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