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My Bias Loves Me

Author : AndrieBTS

Reviewer : wuwtaetae

My Bias Loves Me

COVER: 6/10

it was pretty and yes, it has taehyung with a mic which fits the story but, I just feel like the picture you used could've been better and that things could've just been a tad bit more aesthetic

TITLE: 3/5

the title is straightforward and shows what the book is about but I just feel like it gives out everything so I suggest that you go with more aesthetic words that fit. just search em up, you'll find a lot.

SYNOPSIS: 6/10

I just feel like the synopsis misses that mystery element like yes, there were a lot of questions but, it just could've been something that just lures you in

PLOT: 16/30

well, the plot is good but I don't feel like it's unique. honestly, I've read a lot of books with the idol falling for y/n type of books and I've also read books with the idk person they like turning out to be their childhood friend typa stuff and yeah, work on originality.

CHARACTERS: 7/10

I just didn't see much of character development since I feel like it's paced too fast and yeah, it was good but you portrayed y/n as picture perfect, good at everything and seriously, I don't think picture perfect exists and also the way tae started to ignore y/n just like that, that isn't practical cause believe me, it took me /months/ to even bring myself to stop talking to my cheating ex lol it ain't that easy but then it's all fiction so I guess it's all good.

GRAMMER: 24/25

hey, you have a good Grammer! i didn't find much grammatical errors too.

WRITING STYLE: 6/10

okay so, I'll just say that you have to work on it. just read a lot of books which have like a very enchanting writing style n all just so you could just grasp on it and yeah, I even suggest you to read some tip books cause they kinda help and get an editor if possible!

Overall :
To wrap it all up, I just suggest that you read more and just continue writing! get an editor too! I'm sure it'll be all worth it in the end! just don't give up! I loved your book!

Review Score : 68/100

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