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Perfect Imperfect

Writer :: Paged_Tales

Reviewer :: chemicalkrackel

Title :: Perfectly Imperfect

Cover :: 8/10

A pretty treat to eyes , it's really aesthetic and story idea is settling but what I'd advice is when you write books online and especially fanfictions you need to be sure with face claims as they attract the readers on the basis of the attractive maturity of the graphic, so I'd want you to add up some face claim to it so that it could be a little more ideal like and settling.

Title :: 3/5

The title is sweet but ordinary, it's a shame that book titles this basic are common and this affects the popularity as having a name that stands out increases the chance of being remembered.

Synopsis :: 9/10

I don't think anything else could be more settling to a story like that because it straight away drags itself upon the focal point of the story and settles up the main idea of what it is into the reader's mind base.

Plot :: 20/30

The plot isn't a big of a deal, it's overused and too implied when taken in general, the plain story of youth discovery in a story writing is now an old mate because what the new readers need is a stomach flipping twist, something they never expected, try adding that classic thrill and the reads would skyrocket.

Characters :: 3/10

As a teen fic that progresses about the discovery of a groups youth and the riding maturity it doesn't pass the stands though, the characters need to have a stronger base zone that'll provide them with a lot more progress in an individual as the characters seem hollow and take away my whirling interest many a time.

Grammar :: 17/25

Not at its best but can't say the worse either, it needs progress and a lot of corrections in the field of tenses and profited grammatical senses and usages of new words that'll be interesting to the readers and make the book a lot more appealing in a critical sense.

Writing style :: 1/10

It's the most distinguished part of a story and here, I don't like it, it's kind of messy as it has all the scenes launching onto themselves and also not to forget the scenic layout ruins the interest at one go. What I'd wish you could have done is a better layout plan with the planning of what scene shifts onto to become the other as the book integrates the message of youth.

Overall ::
It turns boring as you merge more into the hole of reads so what I'd want is for you to work on the remarks and positions I have asked you to so that you'll be able to help your book in a better way.

Total :: 61/100

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