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His Wildcard

Author : WintaeCafe2020

Reviewer : wuwtaetae

His Wildcard

cover: 5/10

the cover of a book is one of the most important things since they're the ones that attract readers to even read the description so, it'd be great if you change it to something different since it isn't as appealing. it's a competitive world, darling and if you want people to choose your book than someone else's, I suggest you change the cover.

title: 4/5

the title makes me wanna just click and read it! i personally think it's very good! nice choice!

synopsis: 6/10

it's good, but I'd like it if it were a tad bit more organized. the blurb can go up to three chapters but people here on Wattpad, they fairly spend like 5 seconds max to read the blurb so I suggest you have a quote followed by a short summary and yeah, after that you can have the bigger version of your blurb and I also felt like you added some unnecessary information in there so yes, that's it.

plot: 20/30

well, I really liked the plot but I just felt like it wasn't well developed. the same plot could've been so much better if it was well planned out. I suggest you plan it out better!

characters: 4/10

there are some times where the characters acted irrational like it didn't seem like what a normal person would do if they were in the situation. I get that things are the way they are for drama but please, please, put yourself in their situation and ask yourself what you'd do before writing.

Grammer: 17/25

well, there were some mistakes I found while reading your book but, this isn't a big thing, everybody makes mistakes from small authors to authors with like 20k+ followers so yeah, with time your Grammer would improve.

Writing style: 4/10

well, I get that there are a lot of reader×member based books with the same format but if you take inspiration from someone, make sure you get it from the best. like you can't take a Toyota driver's advice if you want a lambo so yeah, it doesn't matter how people write, all that matters is how we write. there were places where I couldn't understand what was going on because of he writing fomat too, also, there were like 3 POVs in a chapter, refrain from doing that. I suggest you use the 3rd person pov so that it'd look more professional.

overall:

overall, I suggest you get yourself an editor and read more books!

Review Scores : 60/100

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