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Melody

Author : xerophthalmia

Reviewer : SilencedSoul05

MELODY

Hi!
It was a nice journey! Your book kept me busy for a while and I enjoyed every moment of it!
Let's see what I found out...

Cover : 9/10

The cover is eye catching yet so simple and aesthetic! With the main character in it and a pleasant background it goes well with the story! As the Title is Melody something soothing is expected and that's what you provided! Love the way the title is written!
So it's a 9 from me!

Title : 3/5

I like it how the title matched with the context and was really short and simple! But as the story goes on the expectation from the title increases...
As a reader I craved for something more eye-catching after reading the whole story!
But as it goes well with the context it is a 3 from me!

Synopsis : 10/10

The first impression really lasted long! The Cover was great and the synopsis added a different essence to the story! The way it narrated the main issue was actually great!
NGL loved the Synopsis and it really attractive for readers!

Plot : 29/30

I literally lost myself while reading it... The world you imagined was so realistic...
If a reader reads it mindfully the plot becomes reality! I found myself into the exact places and it was a great experience...
From the prologue to the end, every bit of it was enjoyable!
It was unique and the participation of characters were great...
The story took turns but didn't disappoint at any moment...
The way you decorated the chapters was pleasing and welcoming!
Loved the naming of Chapters...
Change of POV was properly done and it wasn't too random
And the Vocabulary itself was amazing...
It was descriptive in its own way but the for the uniqueness it never made feel bored while reading! Exploring a new world every moment...
So it's a 29/30!

Characters : 9/10

The build up was great...
Not too many characters got involved to make it complicated!
Even the side characters got enough time to express their emotions...
You did a great job with words which made it more touching!

Grammar : 23/25

Didn't find any major mistakes which will make the reader stop for a second and think about it...
Grammatically it was perfect and punctuations were used properly...
But I'll suggest to proofread it with an editor which can make it perfect!

Writing Skill : 10/10

The vocabulary was awesome...
Enjoyed every part of it...
The vocabulary kept it aesthetically perfect and eye catching!
And the decorations were warm!
The unique notification of POV change, Providing word count!
These things made it more like a professional story which I liked!
Perfect 10!

Overall :

I personally loved the story...
The Playlists and Images blend well with it!
And it's really great!
The imaginary world you brought to the readers is beautiful!
Would recommend to others and I believe readers will definitely appreciate your story!
Best Of Luck.....

Review Scores : 93/100

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