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The Boy With Two Hearts

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by KPOP_House

by KPOP_House

Author : Seoul_on_my_mind

Reviewer : guliamalia

The Boy With Two Hearts

COVER 8/10

The cover is nice but the writing would be better in a brighter color that would make it easier to spot and identify.

TITLE 10/10

It is the best name for this story and it completely matches the plot.

SYNOPSIS 10/10

This story is beautiful in more ways than one. It shows hurt and heartbreak something alot of other writers rush, the idea of him having two hearts makes the story even better.

PLOT 26/30

The plot is amazing but sometimes when his heart expresses itself that can be confusing remember to pay attention to that.

CHARACTER 10/10

Everyone of your character are portrayed amazingly. Jin's background story is amazing as I said before it is great that you decided to write about this stuff.

GRAMMAR 24.5/25

This story only had one grammatical error in it's entirety and that's impeccable keep it up.

WRITING STYLE 10/10

I love that you included pictures of the characters it gave a easier sense of knowing what everyone looks like. It also comes off as something that should be in a Netflix series which gives this a wow factor.

OVERALL

Even though your story is great remember to not drag it out so much that will leave readers uninterested. Other than that keep up the good work your book is beautiful

Review Score : 93.5/100

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