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Fall For The Good Boy

Author: taetakeurman

Reviewer: guliamalia

Fall For The Good Boy

Cover 8/10

Your cover is pretty but the font for your letters could use some work, other than that your cover is cute.

Title 8/10

The title was almost perfect for the story, it goes along with the plot but sadly the spelling for fall should be falling.

Synopsis 7/10

The story could do with a better description it needs to be good enough to lure people in but not too revealing.

Plot 20/30

The plot is kind of messy and needs to be worked on. It is also rushed, try to add more details this way your chapter can become long. You can describe about what happening in the scenes. Add some information about the character's behavior or emotions.
For example - 'she leaves a sigh' or 'a sigh leave from her pink lips', both sentences are describing the same thing but the second one is more descriptive. A little bit of change can improve your plot.

Character 0/10

There isn't much about the main characters. You used the other members in the tags but the only names mentioned in the story happen to be yoonmin and Jae who weren't tagged.

Grammar 14/25

There are quite a few grammatical errors spread out please fix these before more people read your book. Also fix the mistake in the title.

Writing style 1/10

Use a planning method I assure you that it will help once used properly. You can hire an editor, there are plenty of editing shops available in Wattpad.

Overall

Get a better font for the cover. The title has the one mistake I pointed out. The plot needs to make sense and move in one straight line otherwise it gets boring. Where are the other characters? Please develop your characters the haven't developed. Then last your other grammatical errors that need to be fixed and that is it.

Review Scores: 51/100

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