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Once Upon A Fairytale

Author linuay95

Reviewer : chemicalkrackel

ONCE UPON A FAIRYTALE

cover : 3/10

I don't like the cover to be clear and Frank it kinda gives the wrong impression and idea of a kid's fantasy that's just my opinion but still in a generation like this change your cover to garner more readers

Title : 2/5

the title isn't much to my liking as I want you to look out for different words that are unique and exaggerating instead of the long-phrase.

Synopsis : 5/10

the description didn't spark inside me about the book as I want you to be more clear with what you are serving instead of adding all the precautions and all I also want you to come out as a questionably comforting writer with the description

plot: 30/30

unlike the cover the plot has my heart it's just wow like how exceptionally well you have portrayed the character figuring and then the basic of life the problems everyone faces it's just so good it's totally the definition of don't judge a book by its cover believe me the book made a bad impact on me because of the cover but after reading it I knew of someone so talented.

Characters: 9/10

The character stage is on point, let's just say all the characters are what the reality is until it's blown by a childhood melancholy of fantasy but I also want you to make better entrance points that way it will enhance the figuring stand

Grammar: 25/25

Bad grammar irks me, real bad but this book had one of the finest grammatical instances I have come over it's really refreshing to read a book with great English and the usage of fine words

writing style: 9/10

the style was enhanced and fundamentally great but as you mentioned it's a novel you are making you still have to take care of the word counts and the length of finalizing.

Overall

For all the book is one good read when you give up on the little image of a child inside as the book plays with the very feelings we had been ignoring

Review Scores : 83/100

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