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BORN KILLER

Author preronasaha

Reviewer : wuwtaetae

BORN KILLER

cover: 7/10

I think the cover looks really good but it feels as if it doesn't belong in a mafia based story, but rather in a sci-fi. so, I suggest you change it and if you want, you can even request a cover from our community.

Title: 4/5

the title seems intriguing, it's mysterious, made me want to click in and read it.

synopsis: 7/10

I thought the description was pretty good but I, personally, don't agree with the term 'born killers', since nobody is born a killer, they're made, not born. other than that, I just felt like the synopsis wasn't doing justice to your plot or your writing so, I suggest you make some minor changes or change it altogether, if you'd like.

plot: 25/30

I really like the plot but, I just felt like it's not the most original one. you know, the main leads knowing one another when they were little kids, that's pretty common in Wattpad. also, mafia aus are common too. even if they're common, I felt like you did justice to the plot and everything overall.

characters: 7/10

I really liked the characters, y/n being sassy and savage and yoongi being cold and ruthless, making an exception only when it comes to his fellow gang members and of course, y/n. I also like how y/n is soft with people she loves but, I personally felt like I didn't necessarily see any development in their characters.

Grammer: 15/25

I found a lot of grammatical errors, mostly tenses. I love the way you've written everything but, grammatical errors throw a lot of readers off. your book is worth it, it's good, just consider editing it. also, there were a lot of misplaced commas and missing commas as well. I personally think that you could just go for Grammerly, since your mistakes, they aren't that big. you could also hire an editor if you want. I'm sure you'd get an editor since there are a lot of them across Wattpad.

writing style: 8/10

I really like they way you've written the book but I felt like the pov transition was unnecessary. also, the book was really slow paced. I had to wait for more than 10 chapters for them to finally interact.  I get that you wanted to show their personalities and everything but, I think the long wait was  unnecessary. I loved the words you used in your book, they made me want to read more.

overall:

I think your book is really good. I loved the way you expressed the characters but I suggest you edit the book and work on the flow of it all. I felt like you've done a really great job with this book and I believe that you could do an even better job cause you've got the potential to.

Review Scores : 73/100

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