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Author : MightyMinsung

Reviewer : ialwaystanbts

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Cover: (3/10)

The theme of the cover is cute and I love the sparkles in it. However since this is a Minsung fanfic I think both Minho and Jisung should be on the cover. The colors don't go well together and the font style and size are not very pleasing.

Title: (3/5)

The title matches the the storyline but I think you could have used better words such as 'Grateful' instead of 'Thanks'.

Synopsis: (2/10)

The dialogue in the synopsis is completely unnecessary. The grammar in the synopsis is very poor and the format is messy. It is not too revealing but I wasn't drawn into the story either.

Plot: (27/30)

I actually really liked the plot. I had less expectations from this book but the plot made me indulge in the story more and more. The plot was very well expressed and wasn't rushed. I am generally not a fan of stories which have fluff but this story was pretty cute. However, there were many cliché parts in the story.

Characters: (8/10)

I loved the fact that Jisung and Minho's personality in the story matched their personality in real life and their confession part was pretty cute and hilarious.

Grammar: (9/25):

This was the part where I had a complete mental breakdown. It was not the worst I had seen but not great either. There were many parts that were poorly written like this one-
"Oh my god Jisung, you surprised me, I almost die," I said, still with a screaming tone.
  It should be,
"Oh my god Jisung! You surprised me, I almost died!" I screamed.
There were mistakes in the use of punctuation marks too.

I was loosing all my hopes with the grammar used in this story but the improvement in the grammar SHOCKED ME. The ending chapters were actually very well written, especially chapter twenty-two! I suggest you to edit the other chapters and write them in the same way.
There were mistakes in the use of punctuation marks too.
I was loosing all my hopes with the grammar used in this story but the improvement in the grammar SHOCKED ME. The ending chapters were actually very well written, especially chapter twenty-two! I suggest you to edit the other chapters and write them in the same way.

Writing style: (6/10)

The use of words of pretty simple and repetitive. I think you should improve your vocabulary by reading other books, it would help you a lot. Again, the writing style in the ending chapters was better than the previous ones.

Overall:
I think the plot was really nice and well thought. I suggest you to change the cover and edit you chapters and the synopsis as well. You can also hire an editor to do the work. The author did not leave author notes but has replied to a majority of comments.

Review Scores :  (58/100)

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