REGRET

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Author : JImoumiN

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Author : JImoumiN

Reviewer : Daydreamer_Jhope

REGRET

COVER (10/10)

The cover is relevant to the story as you added an amazing fanart that looks
excellent. The cover is overcrowded
because it is a fanart book cover Yes, It is eye-catching because it's a fanart cover.

TITLE (5/5)

The topic is not inviting as "regret" is an important word of our life. It is pertinent in the story because it's there are not so many violent and horrible scenes in the story.

SYNOPSIS (9/10)

Yes, it gives the right impression of the story because he was friends and also they both fall in love with each other Yes, it is precise but a bit confusing because thought there will be some smut scenes. No, it didn't hype up to explore the story is too
revealing.

PLOT (29.5 /30)

Yes, the first chapters made me want to indulge the plot more and continue reading the story. The flow of the plot is smooth. I didn't found any prominent plot holes. he story had less climax I have founded. It is a unique plot. There was trouble understanding the flashback. The text is not choppy in any way. Some of the plots throughout the story make sense.

CHARACTERS( 10/10)

Yes, the characters individual stories make me feeling anything, Yes, there were emotions and reactions understandable and identifiable. Yes, the character as well as their personalities well presented. Yes, they were realistic.

GRAMMAR (24.75 /25)

No, there were not too many grammatical errors that made me lose focus but there were a few spelling errors. The tenses are not so linear. Yes, all punctuation marks are well placed.

WRITING STYLE (10/10)

The choice of words conveys the meaning well. The words are chosen in complex choice words. The dialogue is relevant in the story.

OVERALL

Yes,I highly recommended this story and add it to my favorites. Yes,I will keep reading if it's an ongoing book not as a judge. Yes, the author leave notes and replied to the comments.

Review Score : 98/100


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