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If You Do

Author : Loveyou551

Reviewer : ialwaystanbts

IF YOU DO

Cover: (3/10)

I really like the colours on the cover but it just looks like a plain picture with font on it. (I would prefer the group collage cover over this one.)

Title: (2/5)

I found the title very simple yet interesting. I didn't find it relevant to the story so, it is a 2 from me.

Synopsis: (6/10)

I like the synopsis. I think it would look better in quote marks and in a fancy font. You could add some dialogues from the story to make it more interesting.

Plot:(25/30)

I LOVE the plot. It is well explained and unique. I love to draw and paint in my free time so this story is a huge YES from me. However I felt that the last two chapters were rushed because they left me confused.

Characters:(9/10)

The personalities of the characters were very well presented. I was entertained by Jinyoung's savage personality in the story. But I must say that Ava was my favorite character.in the story.

Grammar: (18/25)

There were a few spelling errors in the story which need proof reading to be corrected. The tenses were used properly. The one thing I found really annoying was that you didn't add fullstops when a sentence ended. I saw this problem in every chapter so it would nice if you fix it.

Writing Style: (10/10)

I really like your writing style. It is a combination of simple and descriptive words which I admire. The dialogues were clear and I didn't have any confusion while reading them.

Overall:

I really like this story and see potential in it. Kudos to the author for putting so much effort in the art displayed in the story. I also loved the insertion of gifs in the story ❤

Review Scores : (73/100)

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