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The Crown That Stands Between Us

Author : Gukmajins

Reviewer : rinology

The Crown That Stands Between Us

COVER (8/10)

The cover is fine. But I think it needs some changes. The glow effect is too much which is disturbing. Well, I like how the cover matches with the story idea. I don't find these covers fine since there's another well-known female idol in it. Well, it depends on you.

TITLE (5/5)

When I first read the title, I was confused, but after reading the book, I clearly know what it means. I love how the title matches with the story, and it doesn't reveal that much of the plot.

SYNOPSIS (8/10)

The first few sentences of the description kinda make the story appear quite common. The readers might think that it's that common high-school story when it isn't. You could just put that dialogue only (if you are a lazy person like me). Also, I think the description reveals a little of the plot. I mean people might already guess the ending. Try to make it mysterious a little.

PLOT (26/30)

I don't think that the plot is unique, but the plot is really amazing. Firstly, I love how you turned a common type of plot into something new. In my life, I have read way too many Jungkook fanfictions, but still, I haven't stumbled upon this type of plot. Since your plot is common yet different, I love it. Your story has a different mixture like Jungkook is a prince but famous as an idol.

CHARACTERS (9/10)

I noticed that you didn't rush to the main thing. You put efforts to go slow, and I appreciate it. However, sometimes I feel like things are rushed. Well, it's okay. Also, I like how you made Y/n average, and also, Jungkook an average teen even though he's the future leader.

GRAMMAR (23/25)

I found a few silly mistakes which are noticed in the millionth time of editing, so, it's okay. Like this, try to keep the number of grammatical mistakes less so that the readers don't feel like discontinuing.

WRITING STYLE (9/10)

I love your writing style. It's the style that I like and is preferred by many readers. You have beautifully written the story and managed to create scenes in my mind. Well, I would like it if you could make short paragraphs instead of long ones. If you do so, then, keep the word limit of 1000 - 1200 since short paragraphs make chapters long. It's just a suggestion since the readers often get lost in long paragraphs. Also, the length of your chapters is fine. Don't go above this length.

OVERALL

Dear, I loved this story. The idea is simple and common, yet you managed to turn it into something different. And a royal concept is something required since almost all fanfictions have the same concept. Everything is fine, I guess. Also, I think you managed to attract readers. If you could work on the description a little, then many readers will read it, I guess. Keep going. And I loved your writing style the most. Not all authors can pull it off.
I hope I wasn't too harsh.

Review Score : 88/100

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