Antique Shop

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Author : MirrorMirrorz

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Author : MirrorMirrorz

Reviewer : wuwtaetae

ANTIQUE SHOP

Cover: 7/10

It wasn't the most aesthetic one but it fit the story perfectly. The cover isn't much attractive and it looks too simple.

Title: 3/5

Couldn't think of a better title. It's interesting, actually but the fact is I read many fanfic with this name, you can search by yourself or check on YouTube. You can easily find fanfic with this name, it wasn't unique yet it fits your plot.

Synopsis: 9/10

I really, really liked it. It didn't give out too much, just the right amount. I loved how we can understand both tae and yoongi's characters from the synopsis.

Plot: 28/30

It was original and really intriguing. I loved the fact that it was a friendship fic rather than a romantic one. I just really enjoyed it.

Characters: 8/10

Well, I loved vminkook's friendship, loved the way throwed in little moments of them here and there. I thought tae's parents were really fun too! the only thing I wanted to say is that sometimes the way the characters act didn't make sense. it's a fiction tho, so it's okay but take care of it in the upcoming chapters!

Grammer: 18/25

I think you have a really good Grammer but there are some tiny errors in the book. make sure to get an editor to proofread it!

Writing style: 8/10

I loved the way you write it but I just wish it didn't constantly change from tae's point of view to third person's point of view. other than that, everything else was fine!

Ah, I really loved the book! this definitely is going in my library and I'll be looking forward to more chapters! I only got one complain and that is how underrated this book is!

Review Scores : 81/100

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