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MILK

Author : PRIKISTER

Reviewer : wuwtaetae

MILK

Cover: 3/10

The cover was bland. It was completely blurred, isn't something that'd make me read your book.

Title: 4/5

I think it fits. Cute name for a cute book. It made me curious, made me want to read the book. The title makes sense as everything started with the split milk.

Synopsis: 5/10

Well, it was too short and had grammatical errors. Fix the errors and it'd be better.

Plot: 20/30

The plot wasn't the most original and lacked depth. It's a cute little love story so I couldn't really find a proper plot in it. The way the two met, the way they started hating each other, bad boy and nerd, it was all cliché and I just couldn't see the originality.

Character: 5/10

I didn't really find any character development there. They stayed the same even after five chapters. I couldn't really understand hyejoo, I just couldn't get her. Well, maybe, the scores would've been a little different if I had the opportunity to read more chapters.

Grammer: 15/25

Well, it messed with my head. It got me distracted from everything. Yes, the book was understandable but, the difference in tenses here and there threw me off.

Writing style: 7/10

I liked the writing style. It was good but I didn't get why you'd highlight dialogues. They can be distracting. The bold dialogues demanded attention and that blurred the rest of the book. I even remember having a professional writer asking people in her workshop not to underline or highlight things unless it were important because it's distract the readers. You could've just used italics instead of using the bold font.

I think it's a cute little love story that needs a bit more plot and concentration. Don't worry, you'll get there with time!

Review Scores : 59/100

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