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Phantom~7 Deadly Sins

Author: _Knishka_

Reviewer: luvrtaekook

Phantom~7Deadly Sins

Cover: 4/10

The cover is relevant to the story yet it is a bit crowded, it needs a little bit of improvement. Maybe a little less crowded will do, or something simple but related to your story’s theme.

Title: 4/5

The title is inviting and it is thrilling. The title is pertinent to the story as well.

Synopsis: 8/10

The synopsis is intriguing and it gave the right impression of the story, it is inviting as well. I noticed one thing on your short description, some words are repeating. I don’t think that is necessary.

Plot: 27/30

The plot is interesting. I don’t think it is rushed and it gave me excitement while reading the story. The scenes were well transitioned. The plot is unique, I haven’t read any stories similar to yours, the story is very intriguing and I am looking forward to read the next chapters.

Characters: 7/10

I think you should give more in this part, I want to know their personalities well, I think you should express that well. The emotion of each characters needs a little improvement, express their feelings so that the readers would get more attached.

Grammar: 23/25

Your grammar is pretty well. The punctations were well placed and tenses are clear. Just keep in mind that do not repeat words, this is what I saw in your short description and that’s the only thing that you need to work on but overall your grammar is well.

Writing style: 9/10
The choice of words were amazing, they are not the simple words that we use every day. The dialogues aren’t messy as well. Precisely, I like your writing style.

Overall

I really like the story, it is unique and thrilling. I would love to read more, and I am hoping you could update soon. Good job and keep writing!

Review Scores : 82/100

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