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The Aesthetic Match

Writer :: Ana_2504

Reviewer :: haefatima99

Title :: The Aesthetic Match

Cover :: 7/10

The image used on the cover is definitely giving us that perfect "aesthetic match" vibes but I found a problem with the typography of this cover. The placement of the title is covering the whole aesthetic charm of the picture. The size of the font is so big that it's almost hiding the picture of our main lead, Kim Namjoon. If that big font is shifted slightly beside his face then this cover is perfection. On the other hand, the matching banner really improved the pictorial quality of your book. Your cover is giving your reader a soft aesthetic vibe which is something corresponding to the title of the book. Good job in that area.

A quick tip: After reading your book. I am not quite satisfied with the quality of your cover. It's too soft that it's hiding the hard truths of your main characters. When I look deeply into your characters then I am sorry to say that their life isn't all soft and cheerful. And this cover is making me feel like there are no hard feelings about life in this book. Maybe, change the filter of this cover from soft vibes to a neutral vibe of happiness and gloom?

Title :: 3 /5

At first, the title didn't give me any excitement. For me, the word "aesthetic" sounded like "perfect" and I felt like this was like those cliché stories with the title of "The perfect match" on Wattpad. Then I read your synopsis and I thought it's perfect. I see Namjoon was a hidden artist so this title is referring to him. But what about the main female lead? She isn't an artist as far as I have read your book. If it's "The aesthetic match" then in the match both of them should come in but I only see Namjoon revolving around the title. A clever reader might notice these small details.

A quick tip: I suggest, you should change this title into an aesthetic word. Like something, as a reader, I might have never seen before. Something that could potentially draw your readers towards your book. Search, "aesthetic word" on Pinterest and you will find many of the great works of art that can make your book aesthetic without directly mentioning it.

Synopsis :: 6/10

The first phrase carries a certain kind of philosophical meaning. You wrote the definition of "aesthetic" and although it was copy pasted from Google but still was reasonable. But one definition of the word "aesthetic" was enough as the second one could confuse your readers. Remember, "Excess of everything is bad" so don't over explain something. About the characters' introduction, it was confusing to read at first. You were using many misplaced commas and that was making me think if I should stop here to have a pause or break? Although, I have no problem with this introduction except for the part about commas, but I will still ask you to rewrite the characters' introduction. Also, there are two quotations in your blurb:

[ "The more you comfort me, the more I fall for you. Falling into your arms was the greatest moment of my life."

"I won't say much, just know, you're perfect for my happily ever after." ]

These two quotations were quite vague because I wasn't able to comprehend who was saying what? It would be good if you mention the names of the characters after quoted words, e.g ( - Kim Namjoon). This thing will just improve your blurb more. As for the last paragraph, it was good. I didn't find any major issue with that.

A quick tip: Follow the following structure in your description:
-Introduction of characters
-Conflict (the main problem of the book)
-Quotation of the characters with the mention of their name.
-(Not mandatory) Ask questions to your readers about the main conflict.