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BUT IT'S FUN

Author: rDec123

Reviewer: haefatima99

BUT IT'S FUN

Cover: 7/10

I love your cover, because it is very clear for my eyes. I have been looking for this kind of cover since ages where everything is clear for my eyes. But, I think there is something that we are missing in this, and that is our bunny boy, Jungkook. Add Jungkook too since it's a Taekook book.

Title: 2/5

After reading your book, I definitely think that you need to change your title. Your plot is very deep and full of those feelings of love and lust. This title isn't doing justice to your plotline. So, if it's ok with you, then change it.

Synopsis: 6/10

I would accept that your synopsis has a potential to attract the ships readers, but it sounds clinch to me. After some revision, you can add or eliminate few things that can make it unique.

Remember that your synopsis should be a "reader magnetic" since it's a place from where your reader is going to decide that whether they should read your book or not.

Plot: 25/30

To be honest, I have read countless of stories where "A" character is having lust for character "B" or sometimes it's mutual, but they end up falling in love with eachother. But, you handled this plot very nicely. I loved the way, you took the development of plot neither too slow, nor too fast.

Characters: 8/10

Speaking of this criteria, here you definitely made me shocked. I could see that you have got pretty nice character development in this book. The character of Jungkook is very mysterious for me. On the other hand, I feel like I know everything about Taehyung. So, kudos to you.

Grammar: 19/25

Speaking of grammar, you definitely know it's basics, but you need to work on verbal tags. Also, there are typos here and there in between chapters.

About punctuation, you need to work on that too, because you are missing them out in some certain places where they are very necessary.

Writing style: 7/10

You have got quite a rich vocabulary there. I enjoyed reading your book because of this. Those aesthetic words with descriptive language were making me smile every time I read them.
Great.

But,I didn't like those italic words between straight words. You were overusing them, and it makes your writing informal. Edit it.

Overall, I recommend this book to Taekook readers, or ship readers. I am personally not a fan of ship books, because I had a bad experience while reading them. But your story was very different. I somehow felt connected.

Review Scores :  74/100

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