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Author - kaakoi

Reviewer - kimvante_

My View Point

Cover - 3/10

In my opinion, I find the blue color on Jungkook really unappealing. It looks like an avatar story where he's the avatar. Everything else is placed perfectly. The only thing I found icky was Jungkook highlighted in blue. The cover will look great if you remove the blue from the main character's form.

Title - 5/5

The title is pertinent to the story. It looks catchy as well as matches the overall vibe of the story. The story is undoubtedly based on how the female lead's point of view is unheard and how she is sculpted as an evil person by outsiders without knowing her side of the story. So I think the choice of title is really astounding.

Synopsis - 9.5/10

The synopsis is not too short but it is too long. It does give away too much information but at the same time, it doesn't because of the way you've created and written it. It leaves the readers hooked up and craving to read more in order to know what is the female lead's behind the story.

Plot - 23/30

In my opinion, the plot is odd. I've read quite a few fanfics where one of the main leads are disregarded by society and are considered as arrogant and mean personalities. Your story shares a similar vibe but the only thing that differentiates your plot from theirs is how you present it. The synopsis says it all.

Character - 8.5/10

The only thing which I found extremely spectacular was the female lead's personality. It's so strong and so bold that it makes me feel proud. Most of the cliché fanfics show fragile and weak females who always need their knight in shining armor who turns out to be one of the BTS members of course. But in your story, you've presented woman empowerment and how only one woman has an entire company wrapped around her finger. Not only the company but media too and most of the men seem to fear her which is oddly satisfying to read. The rest of the characters are mostly BTS members adorning somewhat the same personality they behold in real life which is not a bad thing. (Can't imagine our angelic boys as assholes ;-;)

Grammar - 24/25

A story is only appealing to read when the writing style and grammar are perfect or at least readable, yours contained both. I really loved your descriptive writing about each and every thing. Also, the flow of the story was smooth which made it even better to read without any interruptions. There were a few spelling mistakes detected as well as the absence of colons and semi-colons.

Writing style - 10/10

The writing style was as same as how other books have so it was not a problem. The paragraphs weren't too short or too long either, just the right amount of lines. The transition from one scene to another was sleek and as I mentioned above, the detailed writing brought more life to the story.

Overall:

Overall, the story is highly impressive. Though I think you can score full if you consider the following points I mentioned above, especially for the cover. The main thing that I liked about your story was the synopsis and writing style. I would suggest this story to those who are interested in the genre angst with a sprinkle of mystery and romance. I hope my judging was fair enough. :)

Review Scores = 83/100.

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