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So Show Me

Author : Jelly1799

Reviewer: Minkittystan

So Show Me

Cover: 9/10

I like the cover. As it’s a OT7 fanfic, it’s suited with the book. The song quotes were amazing to use there.

Title: 3/5

At first, it intrigued me tho the 18+ gave me a different vibe from the title itself. I get it, it's a mature fanfic, but that totally fine to go with.

Synopsis: 6/10

The description doesn’t really put interest in me to read it. It’s not eye catching to me. I’d prefer you to add more with the description but I like what you have there.

Plot: 24/30

The first chapter didn’t intrigue me but as I read the second chapter where the protagonists began to show up, it grew interested in me. It’s fast yet at a slow pace. Love how each chapter consists of lyrics from one of their songs and how you included different members in each chapter. I actually had to play Magic Shop, the song to fit with the book concept. You did a good job with the plot! Nothing is missing and misunderstand-able. Also, the gifs were perfectly matched with each moment. It’s wordlessly unique! I’ve never actually read books that contain Magic Shops which put interest in me but yours did. The scenes are well built with no trouble understanding.

Characters: 8/10

All the members were equally shown and well participants. The feeling of being loved by someone was present in your book. Introduction of each member time by time. Coming out from a dark past with a brand new self. So it’ll be 8 for me.

Grammar: 20/25

I didn’t find any major errors. The grammar is absolutely good and along with the vocabulary. Tho I found some misplaced punctuations. But it’ll be perfect if you get your book a slight edit.

Writing style: 8/10

As I mentioned before, your vocabulary made your work more pleasant and well written. I’m in love with how you switched sides for each paragraph. As in when the female protagonist spoke you wrote it on the left side and other times you wrote it on the right side. This is the most eye-catching thing I’ve seen. Books with a unique and good choice of words make it better.

Overall:

I’ll definitely read your book. It has grown the interest in me after reading the previous chapters. Nothing else hope you liked my review!

Review Scores : 78/100

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