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When The Moon Watches

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by KPOP_House

by KPOP_House

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Reviewer : luvrtaekook

WHEN THE MOON WATCHES

Cover: 7/10

I love the cover a lot. It gives me the vibes of the story and I can see the effort that you exerted in making the cover. It’s very attractive, it can attract readers easily just by looking at the cover.

Title: 5/5

The title matches the theme of the story well. The title is unique, you’re the only one with that title here in Wattpad. The title is very mysterious that is why I like your title.

Synopsis: 8/10

I like the synopsis because it excites me to read the story. The synopsis is precise, that’s why I didn’t have any difficulty in understanding it. I like the words that you used in writing your synopsis, it’s not mundane and it gave me the right expression of the story.

Plot: 28/30

The plot is very interesting. The first chapters were very exciting, it made me read more. The flow is very smooth as well. The details in every chapter were absolutely amazing, I like how you put details in the main character’s POV. The plot is unique as well.

Characters: 9/10

Personally, I love the characters. Their personalities were well portrayed, their differences were evident. Their emotions were well displayed and while reading the characters’ POV I felt the emotion and it didn’t bore me.

Grammar: 24/25

Your grammar is pretty good, to be honest, I didn’t notice a lot of errors while reading your story. The punctuation marks were well used, and the tenses were clear.

Writing style: 10/10

The choice of words is nice, the words aren’t mundane, and they were well used. The dialogues are clean too, I didn’t get confused about who’s talking or whatsoever. Precisely, I like your writing style.

Overall

Overall, your story is interesting and unique. Every chapter intrigues me to read more. This story is one of my favorites and I would love to continue reading it. To be honest, I halfway done reading the story because I really love it.

Review Scores: 91/100

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