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Suicide Notes

Author : NamSeokie-ssi

Reviewer : chemicalkrackel

SUICIDE NOTES

Cover : 1/10

Not a fan of it . I know not everyone specialises in the field of graphics but still you have options of graphic shops that help you get the perfect match to me it just appears like some font on a normal Kim Seokjin picture , honestly speaking I would prefer a better aesthetic than what I was served , I want a cover that leaves me in awe ,  a cover that ignites interest that your cover has failed to do .
Get the cover changed either into a dark theme that allies with your book or a youthful theme that helps the topic

Title : 1/5

Simple and comman Nothin out of the blue , it doesn't surprises me it doesn't leaves me curious reading the title j know what the book will be so I prefer you get some search help and find about words that help you define that dark side of teh society and not some simple plethoric phrase

Synopsis : 3/10

To be fair and just I expected more , I expected somethin that'll make my heart waver , something that'll leave me infatuated , the most important deal don't add notes in the description rather add it in the first page of the story in the warning section , the statement used was simple , I wanted it to be more complex and persistent that'll make me wanna click and see I wanted something interesting but your synopsis was plain summary and too bland I rather ask you to add statements in the description that are not the summaric parts

Plot : 20/30

A plot base , a normal one , some light yet important laced book , but now the deal comes you forgot adding the spike of it you didn't add the ingredients of emotions and feelings into it a deeper look is what I asked for , and some better reality you displayed norms but I wished you had added more taste to it so the next time you add thongs like this that have heavy bases I suggest you to get some more reading that way it'll be better and helpful

Characters : 2/10

To be frank I felt zero sympathy for the lead I wanted emotional connection I wanted proper analysis , a better portfolio of it a over all strong pillar to start off that unfortunately sweetheart wasn't what I was provided with and that leaves me grimacing , I want you to come out as someone with a sense emotional type of characterical additional in a topic so important like suicide

Grammar : 15/25

Not at it best , a low exoectical view , the grammar may seem okay from a view that's over scaled but once you look closer you'll know that the mistakes is in the formation of statement and the failed attempt of the scrutinized look of its insides

Writing style : 2/10

Never , never ever start your story with a cast profile like that . Never . It's a big no , you just can't that takes all the fun of it , you have the plot , but you don't know how to write that's a false , I want you to read critical or dark estiques if you want to come up as someone who has a very strong base in the field of dark teen fiction that deals with suicides and abuse

Overall :

Change the writing style it'll help , read a lot try focusing on the main character more and don't add up unnecessary character info that isn't asked or needed and too many exxagrating amount of ships wasn't needed

Review Scores : 44/100

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