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The Demon's Princess

100 11 3

by KPOP_House

by KPOP_House

Author : SexyCutie_Taekookie

Reviewer : guliamalia

The Demon's Princess

Cover 6/10

The cover is cute but it is also cliché so many fanfic books look the same or use this picture.

Title 9/10

It is okay. It's related to the plot and suits the story.

Synopsis 4/10

In the tags for the story, oneshot should have been added that way there is a reason for the short story.

Plot 24/30

The plot was too fast, slow it down just a little. I can't enjoy the story due to the fast pacing. You are rushing things.

Characters 4/10

Cliché there are lots of fanfics with Taehyung and y/n it doesn't seem original. There should be more description of the character, it makes the story cliché and the character comes off as dumb.

Grammar 19/25

There are very clear errors in the first half of the book. Try to edit your book or read your chapters before uploading.

Writing style 8/10

Including pictures of the cast is always something I enjoy maybe but still, it seems cliché.

Overall

Good story, it's really short maybe add oneshot in the tags that might help but that is it. you can use the Grammerly app to avoid grammar and spelling mistakes. Overall it's good, keep it up.

Review Score : 73/100

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