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PROJECT ARES

Author : space-lattae

Reviewer : chemicalkrackel

PROJECT ARES

- cover : 10/10

I loved the aesthetic aura the cover created and it was such a beautiful on that I couldn't help but feel pulled towards it, it simply is a great stand out and attention seeker, and surely with a magazine like an aura, it attracts readers.

- title : 5/5

the title gave me a feel of a webcomic with a highly escalated plotline, the title makes it really different and unique and sparks a tint of curiosity.

Synopsis - 10/10

the synopsis made me really curious as you layout the main output there it became a great idealistic example of humor.

Plot - 28/30

I adore the fact of how you used Greek mythology in the most humorous yet enduring way, the characters were one delight to read about and the way you displayed it in a writing style similar to quirky comics it just doubled the fun but there are certain plot holes like the characteral pillar that I'd want you to work ok otherwise the book has a great line.

Characters - 9/10

I am in love with the way you displayed the female lead, a tint of sarcasm with an annoying instance, all the way I could do was simp over how good she was and the same goes for Taehyung the way you displayed him as a mighty demigod with a cocky and bastardic side, it was just the placings of characters of that of the second lead.

Grammar - 24/25

Great grammatical intact, you not only used complexity alongside the simplicity of words but you kind of did foreplay with how well the words suited the only problems with this one was some language formations

Writing style : 8/10

I am in love with the humourous comic depiction of the book but I just want you to decrease the use of brackets for instance because of the reader value as some readers do not accept the high usage of them.

Overall :

altogether the book is a chef kiss, I can't help but feel enticed by it in the very first chapter and the graphics used there sparked more of an aesthetic beam that games me inspiration too and I feel the book should be more known to people because of the interesting paranoi .

Review Scores : 94/100

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