Author MissEriya
Reviewer sprite_and_hamburger
I'M NOW FALLING INTO YOU
Cover - 8/10
I really like the season theme you are going with. The cover portrays the fall season you are trying to show. The font and style are good, I like it.
Title - 5/5
I can say it's a long name but it's pretty attractive. The title itself is really inviting, I personally really like the title. It's one of those title I would have been interested if I saw it somewhere.
Synopsis - 10/10
It's perfect. The right amount of info was presented. The dialogues and phrases written there was enough to catch readers attention. The female lead's name meaning is quite interesting and I love how you connected fall with downfall and heart breaks.
Plot - 27/30
The plot is quit interesting. Pace of the story is perfect but sometimes I feel some scenes need more description. The author describe too well but there is still some pot holes left in the story like the interaction between her parents in Chapter 3, her mother's behavior is quite unexpected and it looks fake.
Character - 7/10
Personality of the characters is good and imaginable. Sehun's character and his personality is very much descriptive which is good but Amara's personality isn't quit evident. The author can add or describe more about Amara, sometimes her character seems off track.
Grammar - 20/25
I found too many grammar and spelling mistakes as well as vocabulary. The author can improve her vocabulary by using more suitable words. The story's main problem is the verb and tenses. The author is confuse between singular and plural.
Writing style - 9/10
Writing style is perfect, the flow of the story is good no rushing or jumping on pov. Smooth and steady writing. Paragraph length isn't too long and dialogue delivery is good.
Overall
Personally I really like the plot, when I saw the cover and title I was already impressed. Description is perfect, writing style is good. Overall it's a good story. Just some minor grammar mistakes which can be remove by editing, I suggest re-reading the book before publishing.
Review Scores : 86/100
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