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Euphoric Love

Author: kokoandkookie

Reviewer: kimvante_

Euphoric Love

Cover - 4.5/10

In my opinion, the cover is moderate. I really like how you've kept it simple and did not edit it with some graphics or whatever because that would look really unappealing unless everything contains the perfect balance. It is important to have the book title as well as the author's name pasted onto the cover. Yours had both the aspects which make it really simplistic and realistic. One of the main factors of the story is business so you did justice to the cover by adding a professional looking Jungkook with his two-piece suit and dashing looks.

Title - 3.5/5

The title is sort of pertinent to the story. The story represents a love facing many obstacles. And while facing them, the two entities grow and strengthen their bond and explore many things together. Euphoric means feeling immense happiness but here in the story, the couple is not exactly happy. They have so many problems to face as well as juggle their love life which is difficult and for that reason, they are not exactly in a state of euphoria. Therefore, their love is not euphoric. It's a mixture of happy and sad love. I suggest you select a title that matches the overall vibe of the story. As in, it matches the kind of love they have alongside the problems that come with it.

Synopsis - 10/10

Okay, so the synopsis is no doubt eye catching. It immediately grabs the attention of the readers and forces them to indulge in the story to know what outcome and obstacles the lovers face. You've stated simple and obvious facts without giving away too much information nor too little. You've perfectly portrayed what the initial base line of the story is without providing further clues and mysteries that would be unraveled while reading the book. In short, the synopsis reveals the entire plot of the story in one go.

Plot - 23/30

In my opinion, the plot is not so rare. I've read quite a few fics with similar baselines but I can see that the plotline is different. Not rare or unique but obviously different. Many fanfics match each other in some way but the only thing that differentiates your plot from theirs is how you present it.

Character - 6/10

The characters in the story were obvious. Having all BTS members is not bad and you've also added a few new characters which is a good thing. I hoped that you had changed the personalities of the boys into something more unique and rare but they are somewhat portrayed just like how they are in real life.

Grammar - 24/25

A story is only appealing to read when the writing style and grammar are perfect or at least readable, yours contained both. I really liked the descriptive writings you pinned down here and there about each and everything. The flow of the story was smooth which made it even better to read without any interruptions. There were a few spelling mistakes detected as well as an absence of colons and semi-colons.

Writing style - 10/10

The writing style was as same as how normal books have so it was not a problem. The paragraphs weren't too short or too long, just the perfect amount of lines. The transitions from one scene to another were sleek too.

Overall:

Overall, the story can be much interesting. I think you can score full if you consider the following points I mentioned above, especially for the synopsis and the title. The main thing that I liked about your story was the descriptive writing as well as the writing style. I would suggest this story to those who are interested in the genre of romance with a sprinkle of angst. I hope my judging was fair enough. :)

TOTAL = 81/100.

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