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Can We?

Author : Kookiess_07

Reviewer : Daydreamer_Jhope

CAN WE?

Cover (6/10)

The cover is relevant in the story as it is a plain cover you give. The cover is clean because it is showing Jungkook performing at a concert, but the font you used for the cover is plain. The cover isn't much attractive.

Title (3/5)

It is a bit pertinent in the story. It's not an eye-catching title and according to the plot, I think you can use a more suitable title for your story.

Synopsis ( 7/10)

The synopsis gives the right impression on the story as there was a story about a girl who got a crush on Jungkook. I was a bit precise about the part of the Synopsis and also a bit confusing part of the story. It builds up the story is too revealing.

Plot (26/30)

The first chapters made me indulge the plot more but not continue reading the story. The text is plain and not so choppy in any way. Also, I Like it. I found out the plot of the story makes sense.

Characters (9.75/10)

The characters in the story look nice as there were Jungkook who started flirting at Venn on award shows. There were no emotions
but there were a bit flirting scenes I found as Jungkook kept on looking at Venn and she became really angry, but the reaction was identifiable.  the characters and their personalities are well presented. The characters are kinda realistic.

Grammar (22/25)

There are some grammar errors I found that made me lose focus. The tenses are linear as well the author switched between tenses. The punctuation marks are all well placed.

Writing Style(9/10)

The choice of words conveys the meaning well. The flow of the plot is smooth and not too rushed. There are no prominent plot holes that I didn't found. The story doesn't have any Climax that I found. It is an original plot. The scenes are relevant in the story. The scenes were well transitioned. There was a bit of trouble understanding that thought.

Overall

I would recommend the story and add it to my favorite. The book is completed. I would keep reading as a reader. The only thing I would suggest is to change your cover, you can make one by yourself or request one in any graphic shops available. Good luck :)

Review Scores: 82.75

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