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ASTRAY

81 6 4

by KPOP_House

by KPOP_House

Author : taekoo_kii

Reviewer : guliamalia

ASTRAY

Cover 5/10

The cover is a bit boring but other than that it is cute and can be worked on.

Title 7/10

Your title is creative but does it go along with the plot of the story?

Synopsis 7/10
Make sure that your title goes along with the plot, the description is alright.

Plot 20/30
The plot is a bit scrambled towards the centre that is a major problem.

Character 10/10

You gave each of the characters personality, no two were the same that is quite remarkable.

Grammar 24/25

Remember if describing something or someone with multiple words to use commas, other than that good work.

Writing 10/10

As I said giving each character different personality traits, makes the story even better.

Overall

Work on the cover, title and clean up the middle a bit then you will have a even better story. Add more details or try to explain the scene as much as you can.

Review Score : 83/100

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