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HORROR MANIA

Author : https-kyeoo

Reviewer : luvrtaekook

HORROR MANIA

Cover: 8/10

The cover is clean, and the dark aesthetic of the cover matches the theme of the story.

Title: 5/5

The title is inviting. It is relevant to the story. Overall a good title.

Synopsis: 7/10

The quote on your story description got me! I love how you constructed it and it's not confusing. Just add a little bit of what the story is all about.

Plot: 25/30

The first chapters were interesting, it gave me chills and it made me want to read more. It is interesting because it is unique and different from the other stories. I think it's a bit rushed, it all started when they were bored, right? Maybe I wanted something more thrilling and exciting than just being bored. But overall, the plot was nice and unique. Good job.

Characters: 8/10

The characters were realistic. I can feel their emotions throughout the story.

Grammar: 20/25

I noticed some misspelled words such as the word 'boy'. I noticed the placement of the punctuation marks, they were exaggerated. Sometimes you put too much exclamation points and question marks. You don't have to put a lot of punctation marks to express their feelings, you can simply describe how they feel.

Writing style: 7/10

The choice of words is nice, but you can also improve that for a bit by reading some stories or searching on the internet. The word 'said' is a bit plain, try searching on the internet for some tips. That's just an opinion:).

Overall

I would love to continue reading this story. It's exciting, I'm really excited to see the next chapters of the story. Continue writing, I know your story is going to be a big hit someday. Good job!

Total score: 80/100

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