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BEAUTY

Author :wuwtaetae

Reviewer : kimvante_

BEAUTY

COVER - (7/10)

The cover seems pretty aesthetic but I guess more efforts could make it appear more vibrant. Also, I think since it's a story based on both Taehyung and Jungkook, the cover should contain both the main leads and not just one in order to make it look more appealing.

TITLE - (3/5)

The title is  good and matches with the main lead's character concept portrayed in the book but it makes it look as if the story is based on just Taehyung.

SYNOPSIS - (9/10)

I was actually intrigued because it doesn't reveal too much and it did build up a certain hype in me to explore more since it literally showed a love story between Two people from completely different eras, though I was confused as well because how can that happen lol. But it's good because this way it made me tap the 'read' button.

PLOT - (27/30)

I found the plot a bit unique but then as I read by I realised that the story is going too fast, I think you should work on controlling the pace as well learn to be a tad bit more descriptive since these kind of books require more description than just plain words though some parts were very meaningfully written and precise. I also think you should work more on describing the emotions more openly like how you describe the appearance of the characters.

CHARACTERS - (7/10)

I was expecting some new characters since the story is based in an Roman era but it contained the same group members just like in every fanfiction I stumble upon though their personalities were a little different.

GRAMMAR - (22/25)

Grammar was smooth as it made me read in a certain flow but many times I stepped upon grammatical errors (not spelling mistakes) example the usage of 'a' instead of 'an' or a few words were gobbled up in the paragraph. Also, please make the usage of tenses and clauses more accurately.

WRITING STYLE - (9/10)

I liked the writing style since you wrote the entire story using the middle paragraph format instead of left side format like how everyone does. I also liked how you didn't keep the paragraphs too long nor too short, just the right amount of sentences as it should be. I would also recommend you to increase the length of the chapters a bit.

OVERALL:

To sum it up, I loved the idea of this story. The concept is not-so- rare but it sure was intriguing as you tried to collide two different eras in one knot. The synopsis of the story might confuse but catch the eye of readers as well, making them desperately want to tap the 'read' button. Every aspect of the story was amazing but try to keep the story well paced and not rush it. I hope my judging was fair enough. :)

Review Score : 84/100

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