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Melody's derail

Author: oddella

Reviewer: Minkittystan

Melody’s derail

Cover: 10/10

I’m absolutely in loveee with the cover itself. I know it isn’t made by you, but it’s awesome! Love the pic of Jimin used. The rainbow effect caught my eyes the most. The fonts are easy to read and the extra glow made it look stunning. It standard out from the dark aura from the rest of the cover. I think I’ve reviewed a book by that friend of yours who made you the cover. It’s too good!

Title: 5/5

What can I say! The title itself sends shivers down my spine. I’ve never seen any title like this attractive. ‘Melody’ which gives a whole different vibe and ‘derail’ which gives me another vibe. Should I say, ‘It’s just perfect’? Ye, I think I can say that.

Synopsis: 9/10

I-... the description is beyond explanation for me. There’s nothing to change and everything present to attract a reader easily. It exposes the story but yet it doesn’t again which made it unique. The first speech used shook my body like earthquakes. Talking about sex but in a way not exactly saying it’s sex. There’s basically anything I can say about this. It’s utterly amazing!!

Plot: 29/30

Your book is written by your own personal experiences and I’m actually in love with the fact that you brought your friends as a character. There isn’t much to say but when I saw some huge chapters I started to laugh cause I had to read that much. I ain’t fond of reading huge chapters but your writing made me read it anyway. Literally, the third chapter got me. Every plotting has an amusing effort in it. From just reading it, I can say you’ve put all of your effort to write it. The storyline is SERIOUSLY unique. I can’t help but say anything about it. I’m mute now.

Character:  8/10

Your characters arrived a bit late which I take as a ‘slow paced’ book but it’s worth making them wait. I’ve felt everything the characters themselves felt. Nothing that was not understandable. Everything bits of it was well identified and spelled out. Oh, how many times I’ve got to praise! Lol. It’s just perfect!

Grammar: 22/25

There’s barely anything that needs to be talked out. Everything is used and placed properly starting from tense to punctuation. But I found the article misused. And some misspelled work such as, ‘Shiz’. There isn’t a word such as that. Did you mean it for ‘Ship’? As in,

[“On the real though, we really need to get our shiz together. We know which countries we’re hitting up before landing in SK and what we’re going to do. But not in what order. We need to talk about that.”]

As this,

[“In real though, we really need to get our ship together. We know which countries we’re hitting up before landing in SK and what we’re going to do. But not in what order? We need to talk about that.”]

Doesn’t it sound better? That’s much more like it. You can easily see what I’ve changed here. There are some parts which have these types of mistakes for which I got a bit confused and had to re-read it to get what it meant.

Other than those silly mistakes it doesn’t really have any errors that can pause reading and take a moment for the reader to comprehend what’s happening.

Writing style: 10/10

Your writing style has attracted me the most to keep reading it. I’ve really enjoyed every bit of your book. I’m in awe of how you wrote creatively and explained every detail about every scene and what’s going on. Can’t really find any flaws in your book. Your vocabulary is at another level. Every meaning of a word has been used as it should be. Your writing has an anti-unique taste in it which I’m in love with. Everything fits perfectly.

Overall:
Don’t really have anything to say as I’ve already said many times. Your book is awesome. I’d personally love to read and support your book.

Total: 93/100

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