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Autumn Whispers [Zee]

Book: Autumn Whispers by naleoleo
Reviewer: Nobody247GHOST
Chapters read: 6

Intro: Cast Trailer and Note (9/10)
I love this chapter, I love the way it is written, and I love the graphics! You are clearly very talented, and this first chapter demonstrates that perfectly. This first chapter is very informative, my only concern would be how long this chapter is for an introduction. I feel an introduction should be short and sweet, for example it would only include a description of the book, genres, warmings and characters The next chapter after that would be when would introduce supporting lead characters, author notes, disclaimers, externals and copyright. But overall, this is a very well written first chapter and you should be proud!

Flickering Cigarette (10/10)
This is an amazing chapter! You are an amazing writer! I especially love the translations, these will help your audience to follow along with the story and really understand what is happening! Your acknowledgment of the smaller details matters, it shows your audience that you truly do love and are committed to this story

Chaos of contacting (10/10)
Another amazing chapter. I love the POV (point of view) swaps between the characters, this allows your readers to pursue a space inside the characters' head and begin to form theories and what may happen next

Evening Rendezvous (10/10)
Beautiful You truly are an amazing writer and the detail you place in each chapter really shows your audience how much this story means to you

Enchanting Smiles (10/10)
I love this chapter and I really am enjoying your graphics, they are so perfect

Exchanged Numbers (10/10)
As someone who is not a part of this fandom, nor a listener of either band, I do find that this was written intricately enough that could understand what was going on and this is a good story quality to have as it draws in a larger audience. You are an amazing writer, and I truly did enjoy reading your book like i know many others also would have. Be proud, lovely and keep up the good work

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