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four girls to rule the world [Nish]

Book: four girls to rule the world
Author: K_InBliss
Reviewer: Rising-Queen
Chapters read: 5

First off author slayed the cover. I am unsure why the title is written in such a fOrMaT
(Maybe too give the vibe I guess)

Now coming to the chapters
I advice you to remove the weakness and strengths of your characters in their intro part and as the story flows let the readers discover them.
Basically you have described their personality out there,
I suggest you to modify it neatly and keep it only to their names,
Character design.

Talking about Grammer and vocabulary,
Punctuations and capitalizations were all correct I see no editing in them
But writer you need to edit this four chapters published very precisely because there were many grammatical errors and spelling errors clearly visible.
I left correcting them in comments.

Story flow is going nice since it's beginning it's hard to talk about this one yet
But overall I love the vibe of these chaotic besties.

Blurb is short but ok, maybe you can add more elements too it

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