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Beyond Claws [Dee]

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by MelloniaCommunity

by MelloniaCommunity

Book: Beyond Claws
Author: Shalalalawrites
Reviewer: DHBurnside
Chapters read: 1

Chapter one
The first line was interesting, it caught my attention straight away.

This is a fascinating first chapter and I’m curious to read more into the story. The only thing I can say is after reading it, I got a good impression day to day life with all the characters introduced nicely without a high amount of information dumping which was excellent but I don’t know where this story is going or what this book is necessarily going to be about. I think we need more story and cut back a little bit on the characters by introducing them a little slower. What we need is something that will capture the reader's interest straight away and make them want to read more.

Excellent first attempt. Best of luck with it.

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