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Regretful Hearts [Dee]

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by MelloniaCommunity

by MelloniaCommunity

                                    
                                              Book: Regretful Hearts
Author: the_paper-hearts 
Reviewer: DHBurnside 
Chapters read: 1 
Chapter 1
The story read very fast and I found it hard to connect with each of the characters in each piece. We need more description and focus on each story between characters. Make them longer like a chapter per character like in Daisy Jones and the Six.
This story has good potential. I'm really looking forward to reading more.  
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