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The Twisted Knots [Ash]

Book: The Twisted Knots
Author: aaradhanaaaa
Reviewer: _Ash_es
Chapters read: 5

Cover:3/5
Kind of intriguing cover. Though, it's a bit blurry and it's hard to know what's going on there.

Title and blurb: 8/10
Thought provoking title. The blurb was very interesting. I like it because it's concise but it doesn't fail to interest readers and it contains all elements it should possess. I just wish you would have explained more about the story. Just a little more.

Introduction: 15/20
I like the way the characters were introduced and the way they met. The atmosphere was tense mostly. It was hooking. Although, in the beginning I noticed that you used a lot of adjectives and adverbs. That made it a bit too much and awkward. Try your best to use as little adverbs and adjectives as possible.

Mechanics: 10/10
Perfect grammar, Punctuation and spelling. Dialogue punctuation was done well. Paragraph spacing as well. Well done.

Plot: 5/5
Oooh, what a plot! The breakup scene, the fighting scene, was really emotion evoking. I love the chemistry between the two love interests. The tone, like I said before, was really tense and serious, which matches the story perfectly.

Originality: 6/10
Really great story line. But you know that since there's a multitude of romance stories here on wattpad, you need something to make your story a bit different from most stories in this genre. You can add something else to the plot besides the love story between the two interests.

Writing style: 15/20
Yeah, I can see you have a rich vocabulary. Really impressive use of words not gonna lie. Amazing descriptions too. Though my problem with it is the fact that some sentences are too heavy and it makes reading slower and a bit difficult. That is with the adverbs and adjectives and some other words. They are needed for sure but I think you should reduce the amount a bit.

Enjoyment: 16/20
I really liked the parts I'd read so far. It's a really interesting story and there's a lot of chemistry between the two love interests and this made it more enjoyable and relatable.

Total: 78/100

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