Mirror Of Death [Nish]

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Book: Mirror Of Death by nirvanah1998
Reviewer: Rising-Queen
Number of chapters read: 2

The blurb of the book was AWESOME. 

It was intriguing in ways that can attract readers to open the book. 

Prologue: I was confused at the prologue part because I have never read such a story before. But once I read the next chapter the confusion was cleared. 

✨ Your command of words is beautiful. Words selection that are easy to understand for non-English speakers, it's easy for them to not bother about finding meanings. 

✨ Imaginary is splendid. 

Chapter one: first chapter contains how the character is stuck in the mirror. I'd suggest you separate the part where she realises she is dead to the next chapter. 

Also add more descriptions about her room to the chapter. 

Overall: this book has only published one chapter but is quite interesting. 

I'd suggest you'll who are fascinated by such mystery stories to check this book out because it'll definitely leave you turn pages and question what is about to happen next. 

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