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Kiss me if you dare [Zee]

Book: Kiss me if your dare by LOOVER22
Reviewer: Nobody247GHOST
Chapters read: 7

Prologue (10/10)
I love this chapter! It is so intriguing and mind-capturing for your audience, this is an amazing quality to have in a book when writing because it draws in your audience and hooks them from beginning to end. 1 love how you have created this character Charmey, to be viewed by the readers and I love the originality of the name. Overall beautifully written chapter!

Chapter One (10/10)
I love Fleur (and her dad) and the stability of this character; this will help your audience connect to your characters, it will make them more likely to have favorites and love your book more than they may already, this is a good quality for characters as it further hooks your audience unintentionally as they begin to root for your characters)

Chapter Two (10/10)
I love the descriptions; they are so beautifully written. This chapter is so suspenseful, and it really shows what a badass Charmey is.

Chapter Three (10/10)
I love Fleur and her dad so much... Chapter goddamn three and I'm already in tears, fuck.

Chapter Four (10/10)
A beautiful chapter, it really displays Fleur's grief.

Chapter Five (9/10)
You have repeated a couple paragraphs twice; when she drops the cup of coffee and she exclaims "Be a little careful there when Urban threatens her, they are right under each other and really easy to spot if your read over this chapter.

Other than that, another amazing chapter and I am absolutely in love with Charmey even if she is a bit heartless.

Chapter Six (10/10)
Another very nice chapter.
I have enjoyed reading your story, you are a very talented writer and that deftly shows, the thought placed into your characters and into your plotine clearly shows that you care about this story and that is an amazing trait to have and display while writing. You are an amazing writer and any person would be blessed to read the work you have written. Thank you for allowing me to review and witness this magnificent piece of art the proud with your work!

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