Author: midnightcupofnoodles
Plot:
YES GURL!!!!!!
I love this! It's unique and well written and I wanted to keep on reading. I feel like you could have gone the more cliche route, or even turned this story into something cliche. But you're writing keeps it from doing that and I love it. I only read the prologue and the first chapter, however, I am deeply involved in this story line. Good job!
5/5
Grammar:
Ugh. YASSS!!
Your grammar is really good. I didn't see any issues with it, even though there could have been. Either way I was enjoying reading your book too much to notice.
5/5
Descriptions:
*dramatic coughing*
Can I get a hell yeah?
You knocked this out of the park. Like seriously. You have the perfect balance that keeps me involved in what is happening in the story, and you have done so very efficently. These descriptions go from being on the longer side, to swooping into something short and sweet. I'm in love. ;)
5/5
Characters:
You need to stop. Like seriously. I don't want to give you a perfect score, but I can't not. Your characters have substance to them. They feel like real people, in a real high school with actual things to do in their life. I really enjoy them. The main character is intriguining and I assume she has plenty of layers to her.
5/5
Other Things I Don't Like:
There is one single thing that annoyed me. How the one sibling that was her neighbor kissed them all on the cheek. *shivers* gross.
Really though, there isn't anything wrong, I just need to give you a not perfect score.
4/5
Overall:
I love it. Like all the way, with my entire being. I didn't once find myself skimming over any paragraphs, instead I was deeply involved and somewhat slacking on my duties of being a picky bitch. So, I guess, thank you for writing something so amazing.
Final Score:
24/25
