Author: midnightcupofnoodles
Plot:
I actually really like this plot, or what I've gathered from it. I feel like it's pretty unique with the whole spin on the fear of the werewolf secret getting discovered and how they can either accept that it is happening or try to stop it. I don't think I've ever seen something like that with a werewolf book before so that's nice.
4/5
Grammar:
Your grammar was good, I think. I wasn't paying super close attention though so could have definitely missed something.
4/5
Descriptions:
You have some descriptions here and there. Nothing insanely beautiful and rambling but they do exist. However, personally I would like a little more or some description in different places. I just feel like that would enhance the story a bit more.
3.96/5
Characters:
I think I like them. They all seem to have a good amount of personality, and not super flat. I also feel like there could have been a bit more here as well, but I'm not mad about it either. I don't know. This review has me so conflicted.
3.98/5
What I Hated:
*sighs* You started with speaking, and I'm not sure if I hate it yet or not. I mean, you pull it off, but also it's annoying.
Okay you start chapter one with dialogue as well. So, yeah, I have an issue now. Whenever I see that I think more of a green writer, because it's one of those common "mistakes" that newer writers make. Now once and awhile it works out fine, but I don't know, two chapters in a row is too much for me.
I feel like there is too much in the first chapter. It got to the point where I was skimming and couldn't make myself focus. It just felt like it was dragging on forever with all these words that weren't really getting me anywhere.
You threw in some information about the two characters and I don't know dude. I kind of am okay with it, but at the same time I want to hit my head off of something. I'm on the fence. Usually, I'm like hell no get rid of it. But yours I'm half hell no, and half grudgingly accepting it. Ugh.
2/5
Overall:
I like this but I also don't know. I wouldn't pay attention to your score, because I don't feel like it'll reflect very well. I'm just so torn, because I love the writing in this but at the same time there's something that keeps kind of nagging at me that I don't like. But then, when I find something that I don't like it kind of just gets on my nerves. I think you have a good start? I'm pretty sure? If anything you have a bomb plot. I don't know what I'm even saying. Sorry this review sucks so much.
Final Score:
17.94
