Author: NovaEraKitty
Plot:
It's cute and unique. I don't think I've ever read about a little pocket dragon before. I feel as if this story is worth reading, and that the plot is obviously going to blossom into something beautiful. However, the plot does feel like it drags on before it reaches the end of the chapter. I found myself rushing a little to get to the end.
4/5
Grammar:
Your grammar came off as really good. I didn't see any issues, but then again I was just simply reading your story rather than looking for all the issues in the world. Even then it is always good to find someone to look through your story with only grammar in mind as they can catch any mistakes that aren't glaringly obvious.
5/5
Descripitons:
Your descriptions are very nice. I really like them, they serve your purpose and keep me interested at the same time. I don't have much to say because I really didn't have an issue with them.
5/5
Characters:
Your main character was interesting with her egotistical ways. But, there were times when she felt a bit flat. I'm not sure what it was exactly, but every so often I felt the need to prod her on or something. I would look into that, but really Isis is a strong main character.
4/5
Other Things I Don't Like:
All of the "..." needed or not they got pretty annoying. One can only have so many ellipses in the same chapter.
4/5
Overall:
You have an interesting book here that I'm sure is bound to develop, and turn into something wonderful. I feel like you have perfected the line between being suitable for a younger audience, while still being enjoyable for people who are older.
Final Score:
22/25
